Daily Archive: March 5, 2014

Mar 05

Style Exercise: Revising Wordy Sentences

Exercise 13.7 (page 236) I think my outdated computer, which is five years old, needs to be replaced by a new one that is much faster. The new intern has a very nice personality and is attractive and everyone seems to be drawn to him. Due to the fact that that many writers use a …

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